Tony,
The two pens you made are nicely designed, neatly turned, well finished different kits, centre bands colour aware that appeal to me in every way. There are folks who strongly feel about shapes me viewing your pens I suggest the best review you can get and make decisions about are the general public starting with immediate family, friends bearing in mind without our predudices or any knowledge a true appraisal will follow.
Like your work look forward to more of it thank you for showing them.
Kind regards Peter.